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Heirs of the Promise

by Langdon Franz

For two hundred years, Kilal has dutifully carved intricate runes into his wrist every forty-eight hours to maintain his Immortality. But now, faced with the disappearance of his daughter in the Ashen Lands, the presumed death of his wife, and the imminent threat of his sworn enemies breaching the Sunlight Domain, Kilal’s sanity teeters on the edge.

Haunted by hallucinations and tormented by whispers in the dark, Kilal embarks on a desperate quest. He must assemble a band of warriors to thwart the encroaching Ash Fallen invasion, while also confronting the Heirs of the Promise, a mysterious group that has infiltrated his land and corrupted his fellow Arbiters.

Amidst the chaos, Kilal’s need for the Carving of Immortality intensifies. He must rise above his crumbling mental state and combat the encroaching madness, for his daughter’s fate hangs in the balance. With time running out, Kilal must defy his own limitations, uncover the truth, and find the strength to reunite his family.

In a world where Immortality comes at a bloody cost, Kilal must navigate a treacherous landscape of loss, enemies, and corruption against a backdrop of impending doom, where every decision carries weight and the search for salvation becomes a race against time.

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Rightbringer

by Jesse Vail

In a world where dinosaurs roam the earth alongside men, many are raised for transportation and live domestic lives. The humanoid tribes governing the planet vary greatly in appearance.

Alona was no exception, but slaves are not given choices. Now, she finds herself on the wrong side of the law, a fugitive and runaway. She has no survival skills or battle training and she quickly discovers that enforcers are the least of her troubles. This is no ordinary rundown. Headhunters and skilled mercenaries, both gifted and non-gifted alike, are hunting her. Someone wants her.

Marked for death, Alona must figure out her new ability, and stay alive long enough to find a way to buy back the freedom that was taken from her. Facing a future of danger and uncertainty, she only knows one thing for sure. She is alone.

And the law is clear on how to handle runaway slaves. Kill on sight.

Rightbringer

by Jesse Vail

In a world where dinosaurs roam the earth alongside men, many are raised for transportation and live domestic lives. The humanoid tribes governing the planet vary greatly in appearance.

Alona was no exception, but slaves are not given choices. Now, she finds herself on the wrong side of the law, a fugitive and runaway. She has no survival skills or battle training and she quickly discovers that enforcers are the least of her troubles. This is no ordinary rundown. Headhunters and skilled mercenaries, both gifted and non-gifted alike, are hunting her. Someone wants her.

Marked for death, Alona must figure out her new ability, and stay alive long enough to find a way to buy back the freedom that was taken from her. Facing a future of danger and uncertainty, she only knows one thing for sure. She is alone.

And the law is clear on how to handle runaway slaves. Kill on sight.

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